woofmarkthedog Posted November 12, 2009 Share Posted November 12, 2009 Moos Wrote:-------------------------------------------------------> Was Snow White a rodent then?_______________________________________________Of course , have you not seen her tail ? Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-262728 Share on other sites More sharing options...
giggirl Posted November 12, 2009 Share Posted November 12, 2009 Brendan Wrote:-------------------------------------------------------> ???? Wrote:> --------------------------------------------------> > Let me explain here Mr. U+00A3 esquire. > > Green also means, new, inexperience and> un-ripened. Autumn is therefore ?green winter? or> ?winter green? if you insist on being all poetic> and shit. It has all the potential to be winter> but hasn?t yet dipped its wick as it were. > > The metaphor then stretches further into the> realms of horticulture with the ball symbolising> the seed of the season?s decline which is planted> in autumn and ripens to fruition into winter.> > Here the writer is cleverly juxtaposing the common> imagery of life blossoming in the summer with his> intentional reversal of the concept. > > He then goes on to mention ?patinates? (which I> think were Victorian, ladies under things) and> ?taught skin? which just goes to show that like> most authors he is using his art as a thinly> veiled indulgence of his own perversions and is> probably also a communist.The force that through the green fuse drives the flower. Yes? Please say yes because my parents would be so pleased that a very expensive heducation was not entirely lost. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-262733 Share on other sites More sharing options...
woofmarkthedog Posted November 14, 2009 Share Posted November 14, 2009 *Bob* Wrote:-------------------------------------------------------> A golden leaf, teased by Puma tread. > Soft now! The hand of fate,> Slides, reveals, the turd beneath.> Kitchen sink, running tap and knife awaits.__________________________________________Who's stabbed up then ? Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-263438 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendan Posted November 15, 2009 Share Posted November 15, 2009 giggirl Wrote:-------------------------------------------------------> The force that through the green fuse drives the> flower. Yes? Please say yes because my parents> would be so pleased that a very expensive> heducation was not entirely lost.Sure, why not? Yes, yes and yes again. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-263528 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Max Posted November 16, 2009 Author Share Posted November 16, 2009 A woman scatters crumbs onto the hard earth, although she knows no birds will come to feed. The sun sets behind exo-skeletal trees, wasting its beauty. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-264185 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Max Posted November 16, 2009 Author Share Posted November 16, 2009 . Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-264186 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peckhamgatecrasher Posted November 16, 2009 Share Posted November 16, 2009 *selects Sunday-best-lace-trimmed handkerchief in honour of the occasion* Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-264190 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Max Posted November 16, 2009 Author Share Posted November 16, 2009 A mother hands her baby pieces of biscuit that small, stiffening fingers are unable to hold onto. ?Do you,? she says, ?Do you really? I never meant any of this.? The blue-cheeked child watches the light on his mother?s phone go on, go off, go on, go off - and smiles an unnoticed smile. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-264192 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Max Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 A boy and a girl sit on dull, slatted steel: too young for the pub, too old for the playground. Suits step off choked buses, plastic bags of evening shopping dangling from purple fingers, and head for warm kitchens. "We had no choice," the girl says. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-269848 Share on other sites More sharing options...
???? Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 Why aren't they Bowling? Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-269858 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Max Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 This isn't Streatham, Quids. Our youth sits in dumb pain on frozen steel, waiting for life to deal them in. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-269861 Share on other sites More sharing options...
???? Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 Where's their bottle of cider? Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-269862 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Max Posted November 28, 2009 Author Share Posted November 28, 2009 Tortured youth, watching the impossible inevitability of its future grind into view, needs more than cider these days, Quids. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-269866 Share on other sites More sharing options...
???? Posted November 28, 2009 Share Posted November 28, 2009 Es? Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-269880 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Max Posted December 7, 2009 Author Share Posted December 7, 2009 A brother and sister gather speed and slither down the icy path hand in hand. "We've built a snowman at home," the girl says. "You could come and see it."Her father takes a long run-up and flings himself down the same impromptu slide. "You'll have to send me a picture," he says. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-273333 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mockney piers Posted December 7, 2009 Share Posted December 7, 2009 ode to a pitchforkOverhears man grooming children on the green. Send him photos he said, am I hearing things? The world ails and sickens. Policeman nowhere to be found. Should I grasp the burden to challenge him?It's someone elses problem. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-273419 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moos Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 Mockney? Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-273579 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ted Max Posted February 3, 2010 Author Share Posted February 3, 2010 In the dark a man pushes an empty swing. A small ball lies, useless, in his hip pocket. The streetlamps wrap sodium orange tears around the black heart of the Green. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-293284 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roll Deep Posted February 3, 2010 Share Posted February 3, 2010 A small dog shivers in the climbing shadows, hoping to be noticed by the kindly loner. Only to be mauled back to reality by a cruel winter wind, whose touch is felt by all. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-293316 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveT Posted February 3, 2010 Share Posted February 3, 2010 Ted Max still the floweryiest of them all. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-293397 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roll Deep Posted February 3, 2010 Share Posted February 3, 2010 His seed was sowed in a bed of ash. Watered by a puddles rush hour fate, fed by a retreating sun. Nurtured by Louisa, cherished by all. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-293401 Share on other sites More sharing options...
woofmarkthedog Posted February 4, 2010 Share Posted February 4, 2010 He'd had a wank againMum caught him, like she usually did. After all he was sitting at the table.She served the Angel Delight, though his sister turned down the offer of "Anchor spray cream""Nah,.It's the name that puts me off, sounds like wan....Ow WUH, whats that for""Watch your mouth girl" says mother, wiping the boys moonish face with a flannel"Mam" says the boy"Yes love, Mam" she kisses his brow gently"Mam""Eat up now you" she whispers lightly, leaning on the table to get up"Mam, look were on the E.D.F. ""The EDF ?....NO & look at my hair, why didn't you say....Oh blow..."W**FEdited For Rosie H Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-293450 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roll Deep Posted February 4, 2010 Share Posted February 4, 2010 Have you been at the aeroplane glue again Woof? Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-293453 Share on other sites More sharing options...
RosieH Posted February 4, 2010 Share Posted February 4, 2010 woofmarkthedog Wrote:-------------------------------------------------------> > "Mam, look were on the E.D.F "Beautiful - but can we all please use the last full stop? It upsets me, it really does. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-293454 Share on other sites More sharing options...
woofmarkthedog Posted February 4, 2010 Share Posted February 4, 2010 Neeeeeeeeeaaawwwwwwww"Auctung fritz"W**F Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/8588-winter-green/page/2/#findComment-293455 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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