HonaloochieB Wrote: ------------------------------------------------------- > I feel slightly disappointed that the Sab's lyric > wasn't an encouragement to suicide after all. > I thought as an angst-rudden teen it evoked a > sense of the weltschmertz of the central subject, > so beaten down by circumstances he couldn't even > end his life, but reckoning that the listener > should to avoid the existential pain he found > himself in. > > I think if his woman HAD been able to help him > with his mind, it all might have turned out > differently. > > Something a-like this, perhaps? > > Met a lovely woman she help me greatly with my > mind > People think I'm inane because I am smiling all > the time > All day long I think of her and it keeps me > pacified > Think I'll cook a stew for her with her favourite > - salsify > Can I get it, somewhere down the Lane? > > Oh yeah > > Cos' I need someone to show me the things in life > that I can't find > I can't source the things that make stew glorious, > I must keep tryin' > Make a joke and I will laugh and you will laugh > and we'll hoot on the Rye > Happiness is all I feel and love to me is really > real > And so as you hear these words telling you now of > my state > I tell you to enjoy life I wish all could it's > truly great > > If Kurt Cobain spent his teenage years listening > to these lyrics then he might still be with us > today. Good stuff Hona. We shoul;d probably lose that overdrive on the guitar, it's bound to set a boy's nerves on edge. In fact, we should probably lose the riff too. Strummed chords on acoustic guitars with a nice folk groove should do it.