Brendan Posted May 6, 2008 Share Posted May 6, 2008 That?s very good Citizen. Beautiful imagery (tu) Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-100226 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peckhamgatecrasher Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 UNTILUntil you have had the ground beneath your feet disappear.Seen the sky turn blackand shower you with molten metal fragments.You'll never know how precious the morning can befor men at war. I pray you never have to share the moment.James LoveFalklands VeteranAmen. Repeat posting for Remembrance Sunday Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-145969 Share on other sites More sharing options...
AllforNun Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 As I was walking through the grassThere was Tanya tanning her assP D Stringfellow Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-146012 Share on other sites More sharing options...
EDOldie Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 My Dad loved poetry and always recited (from memory) this when I was small. It always made me laugh. I read it at his funeral and wished i could have spoken it half as well as he would have done. I've just noticed this thread and it's very nice indeed, it's brought back lots of memories. I don't know if it's self eveident or not, but Quoodle is a dog.THE SONG OF QUOODLEG.K.ChestertonThey haven't got no noses,The fallen sons of Eve;Even the smell of rosesIs not what they supposes;But more than mind disclosesAnd more than men believe.They haven't got no noses,They cannot even tellWhen door and darkness closesThe park a Jew encloses,Where even the law of MosesWill let you steal a smell.The brilliant smell of water,The brave smell of a stone,The smell of dew and thunder,The old bones buried under,Are things in which they blunderAnd err, if left alone.The wind from winter forests,The scent of scentless flowers,The breath of brides' adorning,The smell of snare and warning,The smell of Sunday morning,God gave to us for ours * * * * *And Quoodle here disclosesAll things that Quoodle can,They haven't got no noses,They haven't got no noses,And goodness only knowsesThe Noselessness of Man. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-146031 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ohiogirl Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 This is a great thread. Some more Shakespeare:Sonnet 130My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun; Coral is far more red than her lips' red: If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head. I have seen roses damask'd, red and white, But no such roses see I in her cheeks; And in some perfumes is there more delight Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks. I love to hear her speak,--yet well I know That music hath a far more pleasing sound; I grant I never saw a goddess go, My mistress when she walks, treads on the ground; And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare As any she belied with false compare. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-146077 Share on other sites More sharing options...
citizenED Posted November 15, 2008 Share Posted November 15, 2008 At one point in my life I was well into TS Eliot. Here's why.The Love Song of Alfred J Prufrock:LET us go then, you and I, When the evening is spread out against the sky Like a patient etherised upon a table; Let us go, through certain half-deserted streets, The muttering retreats 5 Of restless nights in one-night cheap hotels And sawdust restaurants with oyster-shells: Streets that follow like a tedious argument Of insidious intent To lead you to an overwhelming question ? 10 Oh, do not ask, ?What is it?? Let us go and make our visit. In the room the women come and go Talking of Michelangelo. The yellow fog that rubs its back upon the window-panes, 15 The yellow smoke that rubs its muzzle on the window-panes Licked its tongue into the corners of the evening, Lingered upon the pools that stand in drains, Let fall upon its back the soot that falls from chimneys, Slipped by the terrace, made a sudden leap, 20 And seeing that it was a soft October night, Curled once about the house, and fell asleep. And indeed there will be time For the yellow smoke that slides along the street, Rubbing its back upon the window-panes; 25 There will be time, there will be time To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet; There will be time to murder and create, And time for all the works and days of hands That lift and drop a question on your plate; 30 Time for you and time for me, And time yet for a hundred indecisions, And for a hundred visions and revisions, Before the taking of a toast and tea. In the room the women come and go 35 Talking of Michelangelo. And indeed there will be time To wonder, ?Do I dare?? and, ?Do I dare?? Time to turn back and descend the stair, With a bald spot in the middle of my hair? 40 [They will say: ?How his hair is growing thin!?] My morning coat, my collar mounting firmly to the chin, My necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin? [They will say: ?But how his arms and legs are thin!?] Do I dare 45 Disturb the universe? In a minute there is time For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse. For I have known them all already, known them all:? Have known the evenings, mornings, afternoons, 50 I have measured out my life with coffee spoons; I know the voices dying with a dying fall Beneath the music from a farther room. So how should I presume? And I have known the eyes already, known them all? 55 The eyes that fix you in a formulated phrase, And when I am formulated, sprawling on a pin, When I am pinned and wriggling on the wall, Then how should I begin To spit out all the butt-ends of my days and ways? 60 And how should I presume? And I have known the arms already, known them all? Arms that are braceleted and white and bare [but in the lamplight, downed with light brown hair!] It is perfume from a dress 65 That makes me so digress? Arms that lie along a table, or wrap about a shawl. And should I then presume? And how should I begin? . . . . . Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets 70 And watched the smoke that rises from the pipes Of lonely men in shirt-sleeves, leaning out of windows?? I should have been a pair of ragged claws Scuttling across the floors of silent seas. . . . . . And the afternoon, the evening, sleeps so peacefully! 75 Smoothed by long fingers, Asleep ? tired ? or it malingers, Stretched on the floor, here beside you and me. Should I, after tea and cakes and ices, Have the strength to force the moment to its crisis? 80 But though I have wept and fasted, wept and prayed, Though I have seen my head [grown slightly bald] brought in upon a platter, I am no prophet?and here?s no great matter; I have seen the moment of my greatness flicker, And I have seen the eternal Footman hold my coat, and snicker, 85 And in short, I was afraid. And would it have been worth it, after all, After the cups, the marmalade, the tea, Among the porcelain, among some talk of you and me, Would it have been worth while, 90 To have bitten off the matter with a smile, To have squeezed the universe into a ball To roll it toward some overwhelming question, To say: ?I am Lazarus, come from the dead, Come back to tell you all, I shall tell you all?? 95 If one, settling a pillow by her head, Should say: ?That is not what I meant at all. That is not it, at all.? And would it have been worth it, after all, Would it have been worth while, 100 After the sunsets and the dooryards and the sprinkled streets, After the novels, after the teacups, after the skirts that trail along the floor? And this, and so much more?? It is impossible to say just what I mean! But as if a magic lantern threw the nerves in patterns on a screen: 105 Would it have been worth while If one, settling a pillow or throwing off a shawl, And turning toward the window, should say: ?That is not it at all, That is not what I meant, at all.? . . . . . 110 No! I am not Prince Hamlet, nor was meant to be; Am an attendant lord, one that will do To swell a progress, start a scene or two, Advise the prince; no doubt, an easy tool, Deferential, glad to be of use, 115 Politic, cautious, and meticulous; Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse; At times, indeed, almost ridiculous? Almost, at times, the Fool. I grow old ? I grow old ? 120 I shall wear the bottoms of my trousers rolled. Shall I part my hair behind? Do I dare to eat a peach? I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach. I have heard the mermaids singing, each to each. I do not think that they will sing to me. 125 I have seen them riding seaward on the waves Combing the white hair of the waves blown back When the wind blows the water white and black. We have lingered in the chambers of the sea By sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown 130 Till human voices wake us, and we drown. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-147642 Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozzyloz Posted November 15, 2008 Share Posted November 15, 2008 ken leetulibu dibu douchooken leeeken lee meju morePowerful stuff Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-147652 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moos Posted November 24, 2008 Author Share Posted November 24, 2008 I caught this morning morning?s minion, king- dom of daylight?s dauphin, dapple-dawn-drawn Falcon, in his riding Of the rolling level underneath him steady air, and striding High there, how he rung upon the rein of a wimpling wing In his ecstasy! then off, off forth on swing, As a skate?s heel sweeps smooth on a bow-bend: the hurl and gliding Rebuffed the big wind. My heart in hiding Stirred for a bird,?the achieve of; the mastery of the thing! Brute beauty and valour and act, oh, air, pride, plume, here Buckle! AND the fire that breaks from thee then, a billion Times told lovelier, more dangerous, O my chevalier! No wonder of it: sh?er pl?d makes plough down sillion Shine, and blue-bleak embers, ah my dear, Fall, gall themselves, and gash gold-vermillion. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-149476 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robert Poste's Child Posted April 15, 2017 Share Posted April 15, 2017 I heard this poem again yesterday and learned it by heart so I can recite it slowly at the brandy stage of dinner parties, like Uncle Monty in Withnail. I always thought this thread should have gone on forever, BTW. Love after love, by Derek WalcottThe time will come when, with elation you will greet yourself arriving at your own door, in your own mirror and each will smile at the other's welcome, and say, sit here. Eat. You will love again the stranger who was your self. Give wine. Give bread. Give back your heart to itself, to the stranger who has loved you all your life, whom you ignored for another, who knows you by heart. Take down the love letters from the bookshelf, the photographs, the desperate notes, peel your own image from the mirror. Sit. Feast on your life. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-1125482 Share on other sites More sharing options...
goosey-goosey Posted April 15, 2017 Share Posted April 15, 2017 That's a good 'un, RPC.Here's George Peele from the sixteenth century.What Thing Is LoveWhat thing is love? for sure love is a thing.It is a prick, it is a sting,It is a pretty, pretty thing;It is a fire, it is a coal,Whose flame creeps in at every hole;And as my wit doth best devise,Love's dwelling is in ladies' eyes,From whence do glance love's piercing darts,That make such holes into our hearts;And all the world herein accord,Love is a great and mighty lord;And when he list to mount so high,With Venus he in heaven doth lie,And evermore hath been a god,Since Mars and she played even and odd. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-1125508 Share on other sites More sharing options...
rendelharris Posted April 15, 2017 Share Posted April 15, 2017 Villanelle for 9/11*In that fair land where freedom?s song once rang,The beacon for those yearning to be freeThe hymns of hate swelled as the ravens sang.The clotted darkness of harsh hate?s harangueChoked up the rivers, flowed out to the seaIn that fair land where freedom?s song once rang.From those dark trees where once strange fruit did hang,Where children clapped a burning cross with glee,The hymns of hate swelled as the ravens sang.The brooding hatred?s hooded murd?rous gangHave saddled up and innocence must fleeIn that fair land where freedom?s song once rang.A monstrous leader from this hatred sprangTo cry this land?s not made for you or me:The hymns of hate swelled as the ravens sang.And so the tolling death-knell?s hollow clangWeighed down on souls from sea to shining sea:In that fair land where freedom?s song once rang,The hymns of hate swelled as the ravens sang.*November 9th 2016, Donald Trump confirmed as US President Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-1125514 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TE44 Posted April 15, 2017 Share Posted April 15, 2017 Wasn't Moab the land of the Pagans,Where Davids great grandmother ran to theBethlehem barley field,To plant the food banks of tomorrow,The mother of all bread,A tiny seed, no massive ordnance air blast.Only a tiny seed laid as a mothers prayer iswhispered to the earth,Feeding future souls. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-1125538 Share on other sites More sharing options...
'bout now Posted April 18, 2017 Share Posted April 18, 2017 The Shipping Forecast. Seamus Heaney.Dogger, Rockall, Malin, Irish Sea:Green, swift upsurges, North Atlantic fluxConjured by that strong gale-warning voice,Collapse into a sibilant penumbra.Midnight and closedown. Sirens of the tundra,Of eel-road, seal-road, keel-road, whale-road, raiseTheir wind-compounded keen behind the baizeAnd drive the trawlers to the lee of Wicklow.L?Etoile, Le Guillemot, La Belle H?l?neNursed their bright names this morning in the bayThat toiled like mortar. It was marvellousAnd actual, I said out loud, ?A haven,?The word deepening, clearing, like the skyElsewhere on Minches, Cromarty, The Faroes. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-1126351 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Springer Posted April 19, 2017 Share Posted April 19, 2017 ☺☺ Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-1126678 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jah Lush Posted May 10, 2017 Share Posted May 10, 2017 Dead Snakes by Saira ViolaTittle tattle tabloids hit? porking baby sitters big dick pics rolling sleaze on a plasma screen penny stocks rock dollar dreams start up tech bubble bursts at the seams scandal sheets sell motor adds insurance scams and pension plans film stars fight to be recognised racist wars in black and white good cop bad copon equal pay ballers pitching easy prey Kierkegaard speaks through gifs and memes new society ?too bored to read,? trippin? on a trivia stream fleecing beggars and refugees snake eyes scoring for easy lays virgin flowers ready to slay high five jivesand lying lips back room trades and lawyer?s tricks squillionaires steal workers? lives, yachting under Caribbean skies stash their cash under panama hats leaving hopes and dreams in the welfare line, surfing sofas ? no place to stay join the army for regular pay, waging wars for crooked means, sharing bite sized scraps??? with rats and fleas, deathly shadows on the wall money succubus blows?? you raw fill your mouth with crossing? tongues hymn of truth still unsung. Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-1134391 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sue Posted March 23, 2018 Share Posted March 23, 2018 Lowbrow poem to start the thread off again:"Build me my tomb," the Raven said,"Within the dark yew-tree,So in the Autumn yewberriesSad lamps may burn for me.Summon the haunted beetle,From twilight bud and bloom,To drone a gloomy dirge for meAt dusk above my tomb.Beseech ye too the glowwormTo rear her cloudy flame,Where the small, flickering bats resort,Whistling in tears my name.Let the round dew a whisper make,Welling on twig and thorn;And only the grey cock at nightCall through his silver horn.And you, dear sisters, don your blackFor ever and a day,To show how true a ravenIn his tomb is laid away." Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-1231616 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynne Posted March 29, 2018 Share Posted March 29, 2018 Lost!!a football poemRight, let's get in the car then...hello,here I amYes, there was lots to buy and I had a nice dayAnd it's getting near Christmas it was really good funOh, and how was the match, was it OK?No, we lostYes, I met Mrs. P, you know, next door but oneShe was loaded with bags, you'd have laughed, what a sightBut mind you, by then I was nearly as badAnd what did you say? the match.was it alright?No, we lostWhen you think of the stuff I got, didn't take longWe'll be home in good time, we can watch the TV.You like Strictly Come Dancing and Casualty, dearSo Saturday night you'll have plenty to seeNo, we lostAh, the lights are on red, still we'll be back pretty soonIt's bound to be slow all those cars from the groundIt being a cup match, I remember you saidI suppose it'll mean you'll be in the next roundNo, we lostI'll just have to try on those things that I boughtAnd see how they look..Marks would soon take them backAnd you can decide what you'd like best for teaI bet you'll be hungry, want more than a snackNo, we lostAdrian Worsey Link to comment https://www.eastdulwichforum.co.uk/topic/3145-poetry-please/page/3/#findComment-1233180 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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